Sunday, October 14, 2012

Blog #5 Essay #1 Final Draft


Tasmin Perry
ENGL 101-0768
Dr. Vasileiou
Essay #1
10/3/12
The Costs of Living
     We all dream of a life based on a Utopian society. We hope that our lives will exceed limits and our children will be perfect. But what length would a person go to ensure this perfect life? The people in the movie Gattaca are living in a dream world. As parents they are able to choose their child’s destiny before they are even born. Scientists are trying to play the roles of God by trying to eliminate all natural health problems. It comes to my attention that in this world generally you’ll know how your life will turn out just by the make-up of your DNA. It is not fair that if someone wasn’t genetically engineered to be perfect their success rate would be low and they would lose hope to pursue their dreams. Genetically engineering ones child is unnatural and not flaw proof, I feel the world presented in Gattaca is a portrayed as a Dystopia.
     Though it may seem possible for a person to see the Gattaca society as a Utopia, due to environmental polices like electronic transportation, as a result there is far less pollution which slows down the process of global warming. Also due to advancement in technology there are fewer illnesses so people don’t have to be concerned of dying from diseases because they are prevented. Also the people of this society are far more advanced and are able to take daily trips to outer space. However to support my position of Gattaca being portrayed as a dystopian society I would like to bring up three key points to help my argument. To start with any parent granted the opportunity ensure their child a good life would accept it at all costs. Especially if you could choose their fate before they were born. But what if you are in the position where you cannot afford to pay for the process of having your child genetically engineered, or if the child was not planned. The child would grow to be weak and not have as many aspirations as a child that was made to succeed. They would constantly struggle with the stigma of not being good enough.
     If majority of the people in the society are perfect, no one would find the need to work hard. There wouldn’t be any struggle or hard bridges to cross if everything was basically handed to you. From firsthand experience and throughout history I have noticed that a person who has endured a great deal of struggle puts forth a large amount of effort to get out of the current situation they are in. It also builds character to not be able to take things for granted.                  Lastly, as seen in the movie Gattaca, Jerome Marrow who was born genetically engineered himself, was destined to prosper. He was once a swimming star who always came in first place. When suddenly during one of his meets he came in second place. This brought him to trying to commit suicide, which he failed to do and became disabled. This demonstrates how much pressure one could feel living in this society of such high competition to always be better. In the movie it is portrayed that with the help of science, society would lead a flawless and healthy life. We saw that though Irene was genetically engineered she still she was able to have a heart disease. This shows that science is not always perfect and naturally things can go wrong.
     In the essay, The Man on the Moon, written by George J. Annas. He depicts the ways humans have tried to perfect the human race. Annas writes: “We have a tendency simply to let science take us where it will. But science has no will and human judgment is almost always necessary for any successful exploration of the unknown.” Scientists can try their best to perfect humans but going back to the fact that not all things done in the name of science goes as planned, things just go wrong. In conclusion it is important to think of the future as something we can improve but not as block of molding clay to make what society sees as the “perfect human beings”. 

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